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©2008-2009 ~07Frank
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So here is finally a proper scanned version of Fabian&Kevin with some small changes in contrast and background.

Tools:
Mech. & traditional pencils: 2h - 8b
+ first time blending stuffs

Size: DIN A4


Time: ~ 15 h

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:iconfrancetichsketch:
overall well done, but i'd say the eyes on the little boy are a little off...look to "old"
i'd suggest more rounded, soft eyes.

the absence of detail in the boy's ear is unrealistic and doesn't match the rest of the picture as well as it should.

i hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism.
please check out my gallery.
:icon07frank:
Hey FrancetichSketch, thx for the critique, the ear and the eyes (and the mouth of the little boy as (should be a bit bigger)) were the parts that unsatisfied me as well, but since the impression of the drawing fitted pretty well with the one of the reference I decided to keep things as they are. (ran a bit out of time as well since it was farewell gift ;))
:iconfrancetichsketch:
well keep up the good work. still, i am impressed.
:icon07frank:
Oh and an advice for you, strike this "please check out my gallery" out of your comments it just sounds wired and won't convince anybody to do so.

Either they will check out the galleries of every person like i do or they won't care at all.
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Gorgeous Portrait!

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